I provide in-depth plot and character critiques that help you fix your manuscript with confidence.
WHAT YOU GET:
PLOT ANALYSIS
Pacing issues & slow sections
Plot holes & logic gaps
Scene flow & transitions
Opening hook effectiveness
Ending & climax impact
CHARACTER REPORT
Character consistency & growth
Dialogue authenticity
Motivation & believability
Side character relevance
Emotional connection with readers
WHAT I DELIVER:
Inline comments on your manuscript
3-5 page plot + character report (PDF)
Honest, constructive feedback
100% confidential
I specialize in: Romantasy, Thrillers, YA, and Contemporary Romance.
I don't proofread or rewrite. I give you the big-picture feedback you actually need.
Message me before ordering if you have questions. I respond within 2 hours!
